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warning, this contains scenes of m/m tickling. no sex. no nudity. just a very tickle orientated family welcoming a new guest.

character discription:

Abb/Abbrahham Vaylington {Abe Vail-ing-ton}

15 years old. 5'5", blond relatively short hair.

his most noticeable feature would be his two diffrently colored eyes, one blue and one grey.
Abb is shy guy, he's easily embarassed and a bit clutsy at times but everyone who meets him usually wines up loving him. his mom dad both love him equally but no one shows it more than his little brother Tommy.

narrorator/Brandon

14 years old. 5'6", bald fade dark hair.

theres nothing particularly out of the ordenary about his features. Brandon made friends in many circles, but he always went that extra mile for his friend Abb. the favors were usually prety small and Abb would always repay his friends kindness, not many of Brandons friends ever did that--in fact they were cold toward him at school, then they all wanted to hang out after school. Abbs natural good nature was a refreshing change of pace.

Tommy Vaylington

roughly 10 years old. 4'9", blond shoulder length hair.

his most  noticable feature was his grey, shimmering eyes and his trademark cheek freckles. Tommy is fun loving little mischive maker. he's a strange hit at school with everyone...everyone! he's in so good with his principle he can stay home for two days of the week, no one can explain this. but other than that Tommy always seems to just troll around intising his parents and his older sibling to tickle him. everyone is more than willing to oblige.

Sharel & Mark Vaylington

both stant at exsactly 6'1", age is undetermined. Sharel hars long black hair and green eyes, Mark is bald and has blue eyes.

these two are pleasent to a creepy extent, their most noticable features are thier unflintching smiles--they never stop smiling. not much is known about these two, they just really like tickling thier kids, they say they enjoy the closeness of of or something.

i wasn't the type to make a big deal of things, that's probablly why i'm the only one in years to get invited to Abbs house. Abb only began to invite me over his house after a year of friendship, i've been over plenty of house before but i have to say his family has done the utmost to make me feel like one of thier own. though he tried not to show it Abb was very nervous of my reaction when meeting his family, he was expecting something to happen--that much was obvious. but the greetings went off without a hitch, though his mother pointed out that Abb forgot to tell me there were no shoes allowed in doors. (it was then that i noticed everyone was bare foot, wierd.) this remark put the poor guy stressed mood. so in an effort to calm him down i asked him to take me to his room, from what he tells me he has a pretty good game system. he quickly agrees and pulls me by my wrist to his room, there he and i found his younger brother playing his system without permission. the little boy smled innocent up at us and waved hi to his big brother, Abb turned red.

"Tommy i have a friend over, do you mind leaving?" Abb impatiently rushed.
"aw come on Abb, let me finish--i swear i'll be quiet" Tommy begged.
"no way" he responds.
"please? i'll let you tickle me" he offered.
'wait....did he just say...tickle? do they normally do that? Well actually, i'd probably do the same if i had brother' i think to myself.

Abb turns red der and glances at me, not sure what he was expecting i shrugged and pointed to his computer.he looked back at his little brother who had gone back to playing then looked to the computer, he sighed in defeat and walked toward his computer.

"thanks Abb" Tommy cheered gleefully returning to his game.
"he's such a pain, but i can't stand making him cry" Abb muttered, explaining why he let his young brother have his way.
"it's cool man, your a good brother" i compliment with a pat on the back, "besides, he doesn't suck on that game--kids got skills"

with that bit of awkwardness outta the way Abb and i searched the internet for videos and facts, how to's, and did you know's. there where so many long intresting videos that we didn't hear the young boy beat the game. fifty-seven minutes, over 20 videos later we were still pretty invested in these videos. Abb was at the computer chair and i sat on his bed watching right next to him, i never noticed the little ninja creep up onto the bed and right up behind me. i jumped a little when he whispered a message into mny ear, but i played along and whispered the message in Abb's ear.

"your brothers waiting for you to tickle him" i whispered quietly.
Abb goes red a third time and looked at me, i just smile and shrug. Tommy then hopped into my lap and kicked his feet into his brothers lap, i wrap my arms around Tommy to hold him still and looked at Abb.

Abb didn't do anything at first--his little brother wiggled his little feet and toes to get his brothers attention. Tommy wasn't at all subtle about his what he wanted, nothing less than a full on tickling over his little soles. he showed a bit of annoyance as his brother simply pretended not to notice, Abb was apparently the youngsters most saught after form of entertainment--only with me here he didn't seem to be as willing as he would normally be. i hate making things awkward i acted in a way that seemed to be normal in this situation, i dug my fingers into the little guys ribs--he burst into a giggle fit and i let him go to see his reaction. both brothers looked at me with a bit of shock but Tommy broke out in a smile as he dove onto the bed shouting "again! again!".

i wasn't going to disapoint him now, he sat down ion the bed next to him and tickled both sides of the boys stomach. he squealed and giggled with a little more earnestly while my fingers kneed and gentally squeeze his sides and flanks, Tommy was so excited and giggly i couldn't keep help laughing along with him. glancing over at Abb i could see him sneaking peeks over at his brother and me trying pretend he didn't care, i could tell he wanted to join in but just couldn't bring himself to do so--luckily for him i had a pretty good idea myself. I gave the older brother a chance to look away before i reached over quickly poked him and returned to going after Tommy, Abb jumped looked at us but apparently didn't get the message as he went back to computer.

My fingers scamble over Tommy's stomach as he rolls over on his back, wether it was intentional (seems like something he would do) or instinctive (like he just couldn't help it) didn't matter--he opened himself up for a new attack. then again so too did Abb, still refusing to acknowlage us he made the mistake of putting his full attention to the computer screen--so again i steathly jab him in the side and went back to playing with his energtic young sibling. now he was smiling when he looked over me wrestling with Tommy, Abb realises he wasn't going to avoid us--in the end he decided to just give in. he turned off the computer and threw himself face face down into his bed as if atmitting defeat, anxous to see what would happen i signal the little brother to 'go for it'. Tommy neede no further encouragement, he pounced onto his brothers back and dug his tiny hands into abbs underarms.

"Eek! heheh-nohohoo-TAhahahahahahoommhehehehehehe" Abb squealed obviously unable to control his voice in his surprise.Tahahaommy, tommy hehehehehe quihihihit it hahahahahahahahaha"
"gotcha abbrahhamm, by the way--i beat your high score" the youngster gloated,

i just sat back giggling, its pretty funny to see the little guy rev his brother like every now and then like motorcycle, unfortunately for Tommy i was still Abbs friend first and his big buddy second, i ease off the bed and sneak up behind the little tyrant. Tommy was straddling his brothers lower back so his little feet were an obvious  target, not to mention he was the one that wanted his feet tickled in the first place. i run the tips of my fingers over his wrinkly feet, Tommy reacted like he was eletricuted. he jolted to his knees and screeched like a sneakers on a wax floor, his ticklish little toes curled reflexively and his body fell limp on his brothers back trembling with laughter.

"EEEYAAHH! hahahahahahahahahahaa!" Tommy's unfiltered laughter was piercing, his lack of self control was pretty funny--like he was being ticklishly tased or something. "ge-hehehet get Abbs fee-heheheheht too-hhohohoho" Tommy cried over his own wild mirth.

"you little taddler"  Abb complained trying to buck the boy off his back like a lazy bull.

Tommy was too busy laughing to reply or protest, but as far as his brother bucking him off it wasn't happening--like any good bull rider little Tommy had a first grasp on opposition (Tommy has a good hand full of his Abbs shirt). Abb was starting to feel more playful and kneeled up so he could act like a horse or something for his little brother, this put Tommy's feet in a dangling position--but what i was interested in was the new opportunity that presented itself. hands and knees on the bed Abb still left his feet hanging off the bed, same level as Tommy was just moment ago--only now the targets were much closer.

i didn't hesitate, before Abb could get off a single buck i scrambled my finger nails and finger tips over the intirety of his soles--for a guy that plays soccer for the school he had really soft, sensitive feet. he screeched like his little brother the moment i raked lightly at the top part of his arches toward the insteps, delighted by this out burst i travled groolingly slow down his feet. every inch or so would reveal a soft/sweet spot i mentally marked and memorized, there was one on the outer edge of his right foot, one right above the heel of his left foot and neither foot could take much tickling on the outer or inner ball. Abb hooted, yelped, and roared as his surprisingly delicate feet were explored--i found that i was really getting into this.

i noticed Tommy had recovered and was waited for him to rev his brothers underarms again, Abb collapesed screaming like a little girl and laughing wildly. i reached up and scratched the little guys toes a few times, he bounced and squealed like the warning cry of an otter (look up Otter squeals and barks). now i was really getting into this as each hand occupied one of each brothers feet, alternating hands and styles as i discovered the many, many sounds of laughter each hopelessly ticklish brother could make--i felt like Franz Listzt, Frederic Chopin, hell i was feeling like Beethoven playing his grandest piece in his prime. my instument? four lively feet and strong chior of laughter from two siblings.

"NAaaahahahahahhahahah hahahahahah" screams Abb, "nooohohohoho quit it hahahahahhahah staaahahahahahahahahaha" he managed to whine between girlish fits of uninhibited mirth.
"Aaahahahahahaha thihihihi this guy's greheheheheat hahahaha" Tommy calls to brother trying desperately to show some restraint only to break down to into nearly breathless giggles every time.

Abb falls to the side and traps Tommy's leg under him while the other just laid over his brothers ribs, i sat back smiling and giggling a little as both brothers laid winded on their sides. if they had enough so be it--but maybe...

"okay guys, time for a check up--sit up with your backs to the wall and feet to your doctor" i playfully instruct.

to my delight and amazment both brothers complied with out hesitation and even smiled at their 'doctor' with anticipation, wow--these two really enjoy being tickled. even if Abb is a little shy about it. but maybe a few minutes of intentse playtime will cure him of this, after all what are 'doctors' for?...

thayts the end of part 1, part 2 in already being worked on. shout out to m insperation for this one. Fascmouse, your art gave me the idea for this one.
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